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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-11 03:57 PM


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Moment Borne

11 August 2006


Inside a universe
awaiting your call
In a readiness to
understand love

This day our eyes
will know that
truth hidden inside
For then we will feel
what the truth was to love

A solitude promise
God made so long ago
From a time before
time was a matter of fact

Inside a universe
reaching out to touch your soul
Awaiting that moment
the moment you and I were born


“And of Zion it shall be said, This and that man was
born in her: and the highest himself shall establish her.”
Psalms 87: 5 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-08-11 04:04 PM


great new picture...


I read this differently ...you do make one think and rethink after rereading~~
Thank you for your words today

M

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-11 04:21 PM


Thought provoking, especially for those of the Judeo-Christian belief.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

poettothecars
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3 posted 2006-08-11 04:32 PM


What makes this poem more special to me, from a writers point of view, is that I wrote it on paper, in pen and ink. As well as being nowhere near a computer at the time

Thanks for you kind words

a poet who cares

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR
4 posted 2006-08-11 06:27 PM


Aw, loved this. Excelent penning.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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Michigan
5 posted 2006-08-11 11:45 PM


This is of your usual caliber-wonderful.

Sandra

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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6 posted 2006-08-12 08:28 AM



Inside a universe
awaiting your call
In a readiness to
understand love

Splendid


A solitude promise
God made so long ago
From a time before
time was a matter of fact

Poetic beauty

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
7 posted 2006-08-12 11:43 PM


This one is going to be special to me for a long time

a poet who cares

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