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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2006-08-11 06:46 AM



Felt Like A Knife Being Twisted

Overwhelmed in the devastation
Shocked to the innermost core
Is the returned email telling me
That I was not needed anymore

Email returns address unknown
I wish there was an explanation
Now I do not know what to think
I emailed to the right destination

Thoughts I wanted them to know
My concern I wished to express
Why had my mail been returned
He had written from this address

The fact was he wrote month ago
So I know that this email existed
If its their way of saying goodbye
It felt like a knife is being twisted

I do wonder why it happened now
Is there reasons I will never know
Losing the contact after ten years
My heart feels the devasting blow

HopeĀ©2006
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-08-11 03:35 PM


Sad to not have the explanation needed for closure but sometimes just the fact there is no explanation and is unanswered... should  tell you it's over...whatever the relationship


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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-11 03:58 PM


Maureen said it ... now is the time to put it behind you.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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