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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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To lie here under you, Is all that I could ever do. And I'll be there for you, Till my heart is black and blue. I see you cause you won't get out of my way, Go away so I can beg you to stay. I hear you cause you won't quit screaming my name, Come back lets play another game. I feel you cause you won't stop touching my skin, I'm falling for you again. I'll be there for you, Till my heart is black and blue. I am an oversight, Just like a parasite. And to lie here under you, Is all that I could ever do, To lie here under you is all.... Till my heart is black and blue.. Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's strange how some people who aren't good for us just won't go away sometimes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot Stuff, love should make you think pink ~ not turn your heart black and blue! You are very adept at writin' hurtin'  EA |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Dear Snowflake from hell, Keep writing from the heart. I think your poem is ok but I think also Shakespeare was thinking of you when he wrote this quote for his play. Dave All lovers' young, all lovers must William Shakespeare 1564-1616 From the play Cymbeline |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
~Go away so I can beg you to stay~ Such a familiar sentiment, though it will never make sense to me... Enjoyed. "Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005 |
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