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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2006-08-10 04:35 PM


Had a row in front
storefront took it
all in
shameless demonstration
of anger
fights after dark
in a spotlight
when will it erupt
the next bout
uncontrolled rage

shameless
had a way with authority
gor hired by some
fired by many
had a philosophy
all to himself
a black eye too
when it erupted
the next bout
next page

there'd be an insult
followed by a dare
a tug of a collar
shameless flare
fired by many
had a street language
all to himself

when it erupted
the next bout
in another ring
street fight
morphed to a match
fists released fury
composure shed skin
rage hit a target
had a front row
took it all in
shameless clout
knocked out opponent
again the snapshots
the gloves in the air
had it all
to himself
only briefly




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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-10 05:53 PM


Interesting write.
I liked it very much!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ecrivan
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my own state
2 posted 2006-08-13 01:52 AM


thank you for your feedback
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