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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-10 12:13 PM



I wrote a letter
the words weren’t significant
unless you read them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-08-10 12:54 PM



POW!

It is always a give of self
in order that understanding
occurs.

Well done!


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-08-10 01:58 PM


I would like to echo Sun's rays, "WOW!"

Love, Light, & Letters,
EA

brother stone
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3 posted 2006-08-10 02:15 PM


this is a feeling brother stone knows so well i could put my name on your poem too

i am sorry you had to write this

Interloper
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4 posted 2006-08-10 02:45 PM


Sunshine ~ Boom! Thanx for the read

EA ~ Zowie! I'm glad you enjoyed

brother stone ~ Nothing personal in the write.  Just some thoughts that came together.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2006-08-10 04:00 PM


Oh excellent!  I love the way you turned this on its head.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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6 posted 2006-08-10 05:47 PM


Pilgrimage ~ Thank you.  I think your first time to comment on one of my pieces

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2006-08-10 06:36 PM


funny, I was feeling exactly this yesterday
passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-08-10 07:48 PM


yep...understood here
David D Jerald
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9 posted 2006-08-10 07:59 PM


Dear Interloper, You hit that one with your poets hammer right on the nail head.
Well done.
Dave

Honeybee
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10 posted 2006-08-10 08:40 PM


I'd also like to echo "Wow!"
~powerful senryu!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

deasomnians
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11 posted 2006-08-10 10:22 PM


That's an eye-opener. Excellent observation.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

seraphin
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12 posted 2006-08-10 11:34 PM


my goodness, you're good!
HopeS
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13 posted 2006-08-11 12:29 PM


I know that feeling , this was touching

Hope

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14 posted 2006-08-11 10:35 AM


Susan ~ Don't tell me you are, once again, strolling thru my brain  

passing shadows ~ So nice to hear from you again!

David ~ Some would say I was the one that got hit on the head with a hammer  

Honeybee ~ Many wowerful thanx!

deasomnians ~ Thank you for the gracious comment.

seraphin ~ The Tall Texan scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust feeling prideful embarrassment.

Hope ~ You comment touches me, too  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

CocoBaci
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15 posted 2007-01-09 12:26 PM


What can I say....  A gem...
*~coco~*

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