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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-08-10 07:46 AM


In Shadows

In shadows of my altered brain
Stay tea leaves of brews remain
Forming into future tell
All those wishes in my well

They dance the dance of future see
Beyond horizons yet to be
Lapping on the shores of green
All the foam of things I’ve seen

A brew that brewed the pass of prime
Those flowers that have passed in time
With echo waves that pound the shore
Those wash the sands of evermore

A fiber of infinity
The psyche of my fantasy
The ego and the alters bend
The changing of the change and end

A passage in a common sea
A passage of all things that be


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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2006-08-10 07:53 AM


Beyond horizons yet to be
Whet soothing phrases you produce
to give peace to a day not yet begun
Love you
Liz

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-10 07:57 AM


your like a fortune teller that sees all
extremely nice feeling this gave...like a flow of sea, gently lapping the ocean of mind.  

well done sir!
Morning

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2006-08-10 08:01 AM


what a very calming, soothing read
masterfully done, as always

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
4 posted 2006-08-10 08:03 AM


tea leaves and palm reading....(though I think he's eating some other kind of "tea" leaves sometimes Lee J)....I hope he's not catching whatever it is that Balladeer's got)

High Sigh...how in the "health" are ya old man?...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2006-08-10 10:23 AM


Elizabeth,
Hope you are well, Isabel just had her knee replacement and I have my hands full. Thank you for the kind words, love you too.
Sy

LeeJ
Well done is all I ask, good morning sweet.

Sheli,
You are kind, thank you.

Toe,
Tired, my wife just had a knee replacement
and I'm not getting much sleep. LOL
Glad to see you back in the blue.

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

6 posted 2006-09-01 04:51 AM


"A brew that brewed the pass of prime
Those flowers that have passed in time"

My favourite lines.
Elegant.

enjoyed.



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2006-09-01 08:10 AM


FNG
A fine comment, thank you.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-01-26 04:32 PM


Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

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