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In the Valley
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In the Valley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In the Valley In the valley of life I range Within the sea of interchange Sailing in a wondrous sea Upon the tide of all that be I thought at first, all was chaos A stew of soup of the cosmos But rhythm beat a paths imply And wove it neat this thread of why It greased the axle of the wheel And soothed the senses of appeal It took the anger and the roar And placed a soul within the core It fixed the stars to shine at night Affixed the sun to give us light Making land and sea to fruit The brute, the moot and joy and flute It is the firmament of change The Eden of my roam and range |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But rhythm beat a paths imply And wove it neat this thread of why It greased the axle of the wheel And soothed the senses of appeal It took the anger and the roar And placed a soul within the core It fixed the stars to shine at night Affixed the sun to give us light ~*~ And around, and around, and around, she goes... a lovely merry, m'friend... thank you.    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., you are an integral part of the wondrous sea. I enjoy reading your poems on the tides of life. May you forever roam Eden's Valley playing your magical flute.  Loving Light, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thank you for this beauty this morn  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "It took the anger and the roar And placed a soul within the core" In each circle is a center....ain't it wonderful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But rhythm beat a paths imply And wove it neat this thread of why You never fail to enchant me with your words. *S* This is excellent, dear friend! *S* |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Masterfully done, as ever! I absolutely adored the line: "A stew of soup of the cosmos" Such a profound and unusual way of looking at the universe; complete with a kind of low-key humour. Brilliant. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And round and round we go.  Earth Angel You are a dear. LeeJ Thank you sweety. Martie Yes it is. suthern Love you too. quell Flattery will get you everywhere. LOL Thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'It is the firmament of change The Eden of my roam and range' I would walk through the poetic valley with you on any given day ... You ink a fantastic Eden~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Keep on pumpin' them out Sy. They are soooo good! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper My pleasure, thank you. |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
My kind of poem wonderful story with all the right words that paint a pisture as you read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tom Zart A kind reply,thank you so much. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, to start my morning with a beautiful poem from you is always a delightful way to start my day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick To see you here is the delight of my morning. |
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