Open Poetry #38 |
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Song of the Yellow Rose |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK ![]() |
If flowers could talk... ~*Song of the Yellow Rose*~ My face becomes a mirror to the ashen Autumn sun Instilling crystal memory, hearts and desires foregone The melancholy yellow rose, a fluted amber globe My sculpted sunshine melts away, at Winter's bitter probe As Summer now is ushered from the fickle worldly stage Sundial shadows spiral swift, and time becomes my cage My petals deluge misted airs, a white-gold rain of tears A rush of saffron wishes, my discarded silken spears Yet every rose must bear her thorn - and mine is jealousy Rose red's forgotten sister earns no undue sympathy For me there is no ornate throne in tangled human hearts No mythic grace, divine embrace, or stained-glass work of art Ruby rose is brazen as a scarlet dawn in bloom Her sickly swathes of beauty spun by venom-dripping loom Heed not her call, her soul is black - obsidian's blinded eye O blood-bedraggled cliche, less adored than thee am I The yellow failure withers, sinking down to wat'ry deeps And young rose white, in chill delight, awakens from her sleep The argent temptress weaves her webs of subtle purity A sweet disguise o'er harlot's eyes - a hollow deity I glimmer not as snow beneath the Emperor's Aged feet Or embellish golden tresses with my glistening deceit Concealed by tower walls was I, yet where the lost wind blows The world's forsaken bloom sings on - the tainted yellow rose. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
oh wow...I was just stopping on by and now I'm glad I did! This is the kind of poem I dont mind reading twice...and a third time... long live the yellow rose. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Rachel, you indeed, are a poetess extraordinaire. You truly are an English rose. I thoroughly enjoyed this offering from your illustrious pen. The ink is liquid gold. ![]() Loving Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rachel~ This is an exquisite read~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was awesome...pure poetry that flows...such imagry, such devotion to brutal honesty... loved this a lot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
quell, Extraordinaire is surely the right word. I am impressed. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my word! From the first to the last, it grows in intensity. I like this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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