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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2006-08-10 01:50 AM



The contrast of my green
Eyes and mundane anonymity
Is the thin line between
Humanity and divinity.

Whether I leave a mark
Or depart unrecognized,
My eyes will light up the dark -
Casket or paradise.

Buried or swept away,
As ashes or in flesh, -
Even if bones decay,
My soul will remain fresh.

Words won’t slither after me
Into the cemetery.
My poetry’s my biography,
Silence - obituary.

Check out my poetry here:


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1 posted 2006-08-10 09:38 AM


Andrey~
It is just ALWAYS so nice to find that you have paid us a visit~

'Words won’t slither after me
Into the cemetery.
My poetry’s my biography,
Silence - obituary.'


Brilliance~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-08-10 11:21 PM


I really liked the contrast.  Being alive, yet dead.

Great poem!

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