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Within the Every |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Within the Every More than a half digested moon the changes and the constancy within the every If I kneel beside it my knees are indented with its creases If I walk past it the wind from my passing blows it out and I will never even know that I was there |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ So breathtakingly you ... in *sighs* of surround~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You write with such a delicate touch dear Martie. This is as Marge said above..Breathtaking! Hugs & luv, Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
awesome, Martie the way you use your words amazes me |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
It is hard to say what has not already been said above. But I do agree with them all, you use your words well. Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You are a beautiful person and your poetry reflects that. aziza |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Aziza said it best, and I can almost see you doing this Martie. Only you could take a slice of moon and take us there.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie - "within the every" and how deep and meaningful your words are. We must never walk past without noticing. A true Martie poem! Lovely! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This poem makes sounds of every woman even when every woman cannot. Well done, little one. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, your poems always are so meaningful. Thank you for sharing your deep thoughts. I hope all is well. Hugs, Ethel  Ethel's Creations Ethel's Love Poetry My Happy In Love Poetry Site Ethel's Heart Poems My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
tremendous write little lady |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so many beautiful words to read this morning, Martie M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Your simplicity over whelms me.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Be over whelmed, Sy.... the sound of this... cries only for more understanding.  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.........but if you wait, for even just a moment....it renews, as it always has and will. Wait, and you will see. Would that all things came back to themselves so easily. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie, I agree with Sy...this blows me away. *hugs*....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie, this is another one of your poetic lovelies where I stopped breathing as I read your whisper-soft words...  Loving Light, Linda |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
This just leaves me breathless - loved it Martie - Paul |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yet your presence whispers a wind scented unforgettably. Which we love to recall. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (08-08-2006 04:04 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I walk past it the wind from my passing blows it out and I will never even know that I was there But others will... and will remind you. *S* Beautiful work! |
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