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Open Poetry #38

A Seduction with Words

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-08-05 08:57 PM

I know the whispers of intent to end a life with no love
The way to fully feel the world with senses
Loneliness because of truth be told
The hours, days, weeks, months, and years that don’t exist
The fear of death in slumber dreaming
I know passion for ones who don’t know
And the seasons that cover my senses with sadness
Disappointment because of fools’ choices
Love that can and will, never see fruition
And loves that very well could have
I also know the feeling of meekness red
The smile that shows a weakness red
That keeps a passion deep within the heart
I know wisdoms friends and wisdoms den
Where the rules of man cannot apply
With thought and time, time falls apart
I know passion, love, truth, and silence keep two strong together
Take it all away the madness and the stars
Leave me alone with you

I am the two-toed wanderer

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-08-05 11:02 PM

Whether you intended it to be so, or not; this is beautiful.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2006-08-07 02:56 AM

i enjoy reading your thoughts-
you touch hearts and even souls-
your are very talented-

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2006-08-08 05:41 PM

Disappointment because of fools’ choices
(I know that one)

you have some great lines here~~
M

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