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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-08-04 01:05 PM



Between the 7, 6, 5


In retrospect
my heart has been kissed by
the musings of others
shadowing my thoughts
to find the treasured path
of soft touch
and the unforgettable

never to be possessed
by the sorrowful
a tradition of lessons...
the daily nourishment,
finding peace within...
the art of acceptance

I have no addictions
except for happiness
and innocence of belief.
I am as you wish and
wish to be as I am~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-04 01:12 PM


absolutely loverly!!!!!

this is upbeat, fun and considerably knowing the spirit within...enjoyed a bunch

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-04 02:46 PM


Now that is vintage Maureen!
I love it when you write that way!
Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-08-04 02:54 PM


Maureen,
You just turned on a very bright light.

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
4 posted 2006-08-04 06:45 PM


Ah, acceptance is ever the key. Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-08-05 02:32 AM




Exquisite M...

"I am as you wish and
wish to be as I am~~"

happiness is a
addiction that
cannot be kicked

Don_Juan
Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going
6 posted 2006-08-05 11:35 AM


ah, what a sweet addiction happiness is. And, it won't end up as cancer.

thanks for the read.
-John

nice use of muffin



FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

7 posted 2006-08-07 07:00 AM


I am as you wish and
wish to be as I am~~

My favourite..

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2006-08-08 05:38 PM


LeeJ, I am really feeling upbeat, thanks for noticing

Love you, "I" glad to see you back

Sy, the light  at the end of the tunnel is  becoming nearer all the time.

Kristabell, thank you

The Lady thank you for  such a nice comment and who would want to kick happiness anyway

Don_Juan, hopefully not

FNG, well I am just trying to say that I like who I am even if some may not.

Thank you all~~
M


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