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Open Poetry #38

When I Close My Eyes

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

0 posted 2006-05-25 11:56 PM

When I Close My Eyes

He touched my mouth,
like raven’s wings

black

Thoughts, misted within
frames of conscious,
elevate me
to love, to now
soaring like water,

droplets of passion
nestled upon flesh,
titillating flesh…

I dream,
he covets me--
blossom gleaming,
pervading emotions arise.

Whispers smooth as
lips glide

destination, bliss

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2006-05-26 01:57 AM

I wish you a very happy landing, and I am sure it will be.

I really enjoyed this one.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-05-26 06:37 AM

He touched my mouth,

smiling because I know this feeling~~

Nicely written
M

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2006-05-27 06:24 PM

"He touched my mouth,
like raven’s wings

black...

Whispers smooth as
lips glide

destination, bliss."
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I love everything about this - big sighs....
I think all can relate, but your imagery is fabulous!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

4 posted 2006-05-27 06:55 PM

"destination, bliss."

Atlantis must be a great place

a poet who cares

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2006-05-27 07:11 PM

Very sensual, with a light but deft touch.

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