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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-08-04 11:17 PM



when i see you my
heart skips a beat
i can barely catch
my breath i almost
can't even breathe


when im around you i feel
as if im invinceable that
nothing can bring me down for
i am on a cloud of cotten candy
dreams that i always wanted and
here it is right in front of my
face.

so i take a deep breath and a big
sigh and rush and dive deeply into
your strong arms and expect nothing
but endless happiness.

not edited yet

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2006 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-08-05 04:48 AM


I always love the cloud of cotton candy -
you wrote this really well and touched on how I have felt too.

I like it.
aziza

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