Open Poetry #38 |
It's you |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
when i see you my heart skips a beat i can barely catch my breath i almost can't even breathe when im around you i feel as if im invinceable that nothing can bring me down for i am on a cloud of cotten candy dreams that i always wanted and here it is right in front of my face. so i take a deep breath and a big sigh and rush and dive deeply into your strong arms and expect nothing but endless happiness. not edited yet Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I always love the cloud of cotton candy - you wrote this really well and touched on how I have felt too. I like it. aziza |
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