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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2006-08-03 09:36 PM


Broken Skyway rivers fall quenching life.
raining oriental melodies sing,
flooding my mind eye.
flashes of iridescent brilliance within powerful gray vessels
grasp silver outlined beauty.
whisked away am i
along wind currents
to serene delta's.
sun streams arise
shining within a smile
on my happiness.

nice use of muffin



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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-08-03 11:37 PM


raining oriental melodies sing

That one line stands alone as a poem ... I love it.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-08-04 12:37 PM




simply lovely John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-08-04 07:31 PM


yep

lovely for sure

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