| Open Poetry #38 |
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Skyway Melodies |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going
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Broken Skyway rivers fall quenching life. raining oriental melodies sing, flooding my mind eye. flashes of iridescent brilliance within powerful gray vessels grasp silver outlined beauty. whisked away am i along wind currents to serene delta's. sun streams arise shining within a smile on my happiness. nice use of muffin |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
raining oriental melodies sing That one line stands alone as a poem ... I love it. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
simply lovely John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep lovely for sure |
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