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Open Poetry #38

My golden girl...

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-08-03 08:21 AM

When the dawn comes I will breathe
again the sweetness of her defeat.
When the highs come easily
I shall deem myself complete.

And I'm dreaming of the beat,
the softened seals of everything.
That earthen white and black tar frown
I use for softening my nouns.

And those echoes of what was
and IS inside this lofty loss,
shall break me more than I can say
and all I has to do was pay.

As if I had wrapped cotton wool
around the essence of my inner fool
Just to feel that summer child
when the world was soft and mild

That's all she wrote, my heroine,
for beauty's sake, a golden grin.
My life, my love, my everything.
Who needs friends when you will sing?

My golden girl
let's spin and whirl
You. Are. My. World.

"We all know Major Tom's a junkie"

Ashes to Ashes - David Bowie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-08-03 10:49 AM

sweet!

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

2 posted 2006-08-03 12:17 PM

Moving stuff. I found myself in awe of the lines: "As if I had wrapped cotton wool/around the essence of my inner fool" - most people can only dream of creating art like that.

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
- The Mighty Boosh

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

3 posted 2006-08-03 01:23 PM

beautiful!
and so touching

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

4 posted 2006-08-03 01:59 PM

I enjoyed this very much.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2006-08-03 11:21 PM

Most nice - I like it lots.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

6 posted 2006-08-04 12:01 PM

This is very nice. I understand the feeling well.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

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