I think that I might love you

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Open Poetry #38

I think that I might love you

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

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Neverland

0 posted 2006-08-03 07:13 AM

I think that I might love you

even after
my tears
and your pain

After nights
when you would struggle against
the binds of
a mortal life
and the dawn would never come

After tears that screamed
for sweet release as they
tumbled down your cheek

Even after my words
and your hurt
and the secrets that gnawed
a hole in our perfection
Even after everything

I know that I must love you

Sole
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since 2006-07-29

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England

1 posted 2006-08-03 07:30 AM

nice write, really liked it. Im not sure if it was suposed to make me depressed but it sure did the job =D.

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-08-03 07:44 AM

Yes, love knows! Good write!

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2006-08-03 09:02 AM

I understand this...I feel it down to my bones I do

sad in a beautiful way

the quell
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Liverpool, UK

4 posted 2006-08-03 02:35 PM

a very poignant write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-08-03 02:59 PM

Love can conquer all!

I felt your words, Loving One.

elisalie16
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new jersey

6 posted 2006-08-03 10:38 PM

flowed nicely. i understood exactly what you meant. nice job

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

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Portland, OR

7 posted 2006-08-04 12:13 PM

I well understand this feeling..... Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

The Lady
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The Southwest

8 posted 2006-08-04 12:33 PM

sad...
but beautifully done

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-08-05 04:16 AM

Nice writing...James

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

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Neverland

10 posted 2006-08-06 08:17 AM

loving One...
I think that I might like that *grin*
thanks all for replying!!!
much love

FNG
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since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

11 posted 2006-08-07 06:10 AM

painfully beautiful....

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