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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-07-31 06:40 PM



My Happiness


Now that she's gone,

I've realized at least
one of the things
I did wrong.

I was too dependent
upon her for my
happiness.


JamesLee
02July
2006



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-08-01 06:41 AM


so true
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2 posted 2006-08-02 12:23 PM


Yup that is how it goes James, it comes from inside and we all find that out the hard way.
aziza
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3 posted 2006-08-03 01:20 AM


I think it is easy to let that happen.  Your poetry makes me think ~ that is one thing I really like about it.

aziza

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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4 posted 2006-08-05 02:34 AM



James, you are so
honest
and obviously seeking

your words turn my heart


Kristabell
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5 posted 2006-08-05 03:21 AM


Well... there is no crime in happiness. Nice write, simple.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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6 posted 2006-08-05 03:28 AM


You are RIGHT! You totally just made me see it! I just wrote about feeling this exact same way! Thanks!

I can totally relate to this poem and it was a great write!

FNG
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7 posted 2006-08-07 06:06 AM


one of the common mistake in relationships isn't it. true enough. thanks for sharing.
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