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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-08-02 04:31 PM



one more use to be
(un)anniversary day
filled with emptiness

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-02 05:43 PM


How could anyone so full of it be empty?
"It" being LOVE
~*~
I know you are loved
we all here love you truly
never forget it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2006-08-02 10:30 PM



make the emptiness full
of possiblities

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-08-03 12:03 PM


that stinks

you deserve so much better

poettothecars
Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
4 posted 2006-08-03 08:34 PM


This was the only reply I could think of

3986
“Our Anniversary Poem”
13 May 2005

Where ever there was love
There was confidence
and trust in all
To keep your word
and never be out of turn

Those what could be secrets
no other parity in respect
would ever in chance learn
For a word was a promise
and a promise was a word

It was not what she said
or told him in her own way
It was that he never was
going to repeat or say

Because to him - she was
as precious to in heart hold
Where any news was good
and best was friend’s together

“for Lori”
“And for the precious fruits brought forth by the sun,
and for the precious things put forth by the moon.”
Deuteronomy 33: 14 KJV

“She is more precious than rubies: and all the things
thou canst desire are not to be compared unto her.”
Proverbs 3: 15 KJV

© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2006-08-03 09:28 PM


I thought about having un-birthdays. Then I looked in the mirror - Nope, that wouldn't work. Un-anniversaries maybe??? My wifejust wouldn't understand. She's so narrow minded that way.(LOL - she's NOT reading over my shoulder either!)

Liked the way you did this though...

Now un-work days would be nice (if I had the
money to afford them - another wife thing).

Gonna have to think some more on those "un" things...

Liked the way you did this though...

j.

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