Open Poetry #38 |
You Will Always Be |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
You Will Always Be I adore you it is true did I say that I loved you you are the silver lining beneath dark storms shining and take away my very breath I shall feel this way till death you are never away too far close my eyes and there you are hearts soar with wings of birds for you are the thoughts of my words and when you and I are apart it is you that holds my heart and as simple as this may be you are always part of me just some words cut from |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me all warm and cozy |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I dont know if this is a write of adoration, like Rumi declaring his love of God. or... if it is for a VERY fortunate someone. It works either way. Wonderful write ! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So beautiful! |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Very beautiful. I would love to feel that way. |
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