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aziza
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0 posted 2006-08-02 02:15 AM


Our Goodbyes

Your cries mingle with my tears
We create a delicate blanket
to cover your pain.
We create a magic carpet
for you to ride.
Again, free to run after the swallows.
Again, free to be who you once were.
I rock among the looks you send my way.
We have made the decision.
All that remains are the goodbyes.

aziza - to my Tasha Dog


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-08-02 04:58 AM


awww
El_Campeador
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2 posted 2006-08-02 07:37 AM


Goodbyes are often so difficult to say. But they can be beautiful, too, as the final memory you have... You did a good job of capturing both feelings...

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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