Open Poetry #38 |
Get Ready, Here I Come |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Get Ready, Here I Come Kansas City calls to me louder with the passing days, overcasting the voice of fear that says I cannot change my ways. I am ripe with anticipation, rekindled by the path ahead, not holding on to what I have but to make a brand new life instead. Change is good for the heart and soul and so change is what I choose, recalling what was said of freedom... just means nothin' left to lose. My time for loss is over. I'm tired of where I'm from, so Missouri, what I say to you is "get ready, here I come!" |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Wonderful!!!! I loved the energy, the sense of life flourishing. You've gone wrong! You've gone wrong in your mind-tank! |
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AlexanderPoetry Junior Member
since 2006-07-31
Posts 30 |
So much of what is written here rings so true.. Well put together as well. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
That's my girl. You are on the right track. A change will do wonders for you. You have no reason to stay put. Your youth and beauty and smarts will do you good wherever you go.Good luck. YOU ARE LOVED! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Not only is this wonderfully executed, but you quote Joplin! I love it! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Go get um, Dixie!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You're a Joplin kind of woman! Soulful and strong! Aren't you gone yet? Love this warning. Get ready KC! Here she comes! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you go girl so very proud of you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
That's our Dixie Gal! Look out Kansas City!! Love ya lady~ |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
good luck to you in your new venture...may you find the happiness which you long for so much... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things happen for you...James |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
good for you Dixie! *smiles* new place, clean slate sounds like just what the doctor ordered *hugs* hope everything goes wonderfully! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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the concrete rose Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33 |
That was great. You sound like a person who's ready for anything to come in your way. I really enjoyed it. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yay! I am happy for you and you just pulled me into your poem with your title. Is Kansas City ready for you? Who knows and who cares - you are on your way! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
different location but still close to my heart... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each so much for the encouragement and positive feedback! It means so much! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Just one more whirlwind in kansas, except your storm may just be refreshing, great write and good luck...thank you for the words.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks Phil |
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