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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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yellow boots of a scuff shoe sun with his hands in his jeans dareya eyes on your sunburn when you wore the sweaty wet we had our backs up tender on the walls of the splinter store making the music box moves you said my legs were too long and that the wrinkles would show if your cotton didn't get hung on the tree finger willing and that the gin man would know even a proper cre' has cravins for concussions in her belly when the storms write colly songs on the naked face windows when your shimmer is barely on _________________ daark scribblenote: porchfootin when the humid is up in the house and the rain is strummin snap bean wags [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-31-2006 08:34 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the Cherokee in me knows the beat of this long song... well done, Sir... even the splinterwood is smiling... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, always a pleasure to have your eyes watchin the wood wet makin dark colors, thank you |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Ahhhhhh....might there be another, sir? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your legs ARE too long!!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you, packin 38's straight leg me, humming at those snaps grinning at me |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am now officially addicted. Jeans and long legs? I am lost! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Summer cottons...I'd be barefootin' porchfooting waiting for those rains. Loved the music box touch, too. Dancin' again. ~ Klassy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sera, thanks ms, will see what the mind loses today.. _______________ ms martie, thanks lil neighbor...but it was the ladder all the time _______________ ms midnite, dang I thought I pulled the tag off em..oh well, busted, thanks lady friend _______________ ms aziza, thank you for the reviews, and addiction. __________ ms kl, thank you for the eyes and listens to the music |
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