Bad Poetry on a Bleak Night

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Open Poetry #38

Bad Poetry on a Bleak Night

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-31 12:13 PM

A night of bad poetry
syrupy words discarded
inadequate, superficial
trying to express
only how much I miss you.
It's a longing that consumes me
as it embarrasses me
laughing, I mutter to myself
"It is only two nights, buck up!"
Knowing how used to being with you I am
comfortable in your partnership
cozy like worn flannel pajama bottoms
on a cold, bleak night.
I miss you so.

aziza

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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1 posted 2006-07-31 09:25 AM

How can a poem be cute and poignant at the same time? I dunno, so I'll just enjoy!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-07-31 07:09 PM

this is adorable!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-07-31 08:22 PM

well, must be a wonderfully fulfilling relationship if two days apart generates this
enjoyable read

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

4 posted 2006-07-31 10:00 PM

Another wonder from aziza's pen.

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2006-07-31 10:03 PM

I know how you feel. I have been away from my someone since... Well, wow, it has only been a week and a day. I will next see him in another two weeks... No, words cannot express that. Nice write.

Kristabell

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2006-07-31 10:09 PM

This Is Cute, I Like It.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-07-31 10:33 PM

"cozy like worn flannel pajama bottoms
on a cold, bleak night"

Sounds like a wonderful relationship.
Good poem too.

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