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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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she lies on dream sheets shadow hair calling on pillow brings hand to mouth bites craves long pull of sugar water pitches sighs wait so hard it stains the close air from the empty of her bed she hears desire droning at her porch light lone accordion playing her heart engorged flower unfolding desperate to display its bloom charcoal man present in his smug absence |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What the mind does. You are portraying quite the character... and I am enjoying your journey!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It is wonderful or maybe terrible what the mind does Karilea... Thank you for taking the journey with me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is the only way we grow. Learn, and write on. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love how you write. she lies on dream sheets shadow hair calling on pillow |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady The imagery with in this, lights the emotion in this poem...and I feel it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm in awe so wonderfully written! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So wonderfully emotion packed. Well done! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
My Lord! You are so darn talented! I'm hooked. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much, aziza I appreciate your reply I’m glad you feel it Martie… thank you passing shadows, thank you for your kind reply thank you Nancy hugs to you thank you so much, seraphin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wickedly wonderful  am enjoying this mini-series |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wicked is only part of the story, Kacy. Thank you.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sounds like she hears the highways rubbing legs on the windows enjoyed the music of this one |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you, Stranger. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yeah you've got me hook line and sinker with this one If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you so much Kristen! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am still in love with this poetic story ~ I think you are one reason that "aziza" stayed at PiP. She had to keep reading ... and then one day it seemed only right to be "Alison" among such good people. Thank you, Kate. Alison |
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