Open Poetry #38 |
Places Far Away |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Places Far Away In a place far away she thought of him. Not often, but occasionally thoughts would enter into her mind....perhaps. Was he allright, had he gone on with his life, for she had made her choice to move on, and there's nothing to go back too after you decide to move on, or is there... He had begun to pursue a path of acceptance and forgiveness, and to him there was none that he would rather forgive than her, and she could be sure to receive his forgiveness either way; whether she chose to return or preferred to stay, in places far away. JamesLee 27July 2006 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James... a for it is true. |
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dreamdc Member
since 2005-11-11
Posts 54Utah, USA |
This brought back a lot of memories for me... I moved on, he eventually forgave me and moved on also, but not a day goes by that I don't think of him... And wonder how he is, if he's in love, and if I would have stayed with him and stayed strong if things would have been amazingly different. Thank you for sharing this, it is very beautiful. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Such longing here, James. "Not often, but occasionally thoughts would enter into her mind....perhaps" A sincere piece of work. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I see we are in the same place James well said |
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