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My Daughters
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My Daughters |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Daughters My daughters have large wings to me That I must catch to kiss you see They fly a world of mental prime Horizons of beyond my time They are to me new butterflies That fly new fields of green where lies Their future and their fantasies Their very own eternities It gives me pause to see them go When curtains close upon my show My paint brush and my words of choice I leave them with my poems of voice Of all the works I did mandate You are the best of my create And memories stay my heart piled high Some of which off make me cry You are the flowers of my season I love you both beyond all reason |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
such a sweet flow of words, Sy  M |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
perfectly perfect  nothing quite like a daughter is there? By words the mind is winged |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! What a beautiful tribute to your daughters. This is ever so lovely! ~Morning Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Lovely tribute... Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is wonderful when daughters are truly their daddy's girl. Keeping this one close, Sy.   " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I know the feeling beautiful tribute Sy |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You helped them grow the wings to fly ~ and your love shines in this poem. It lit up my screen and filled my heart. aziza |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is an absolutely beautiful tribute to your daughters. Thank you for sharing it. Your girls I am sure will always treasure this. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Your love for your children glow upon this page of blue. They will smile with pride when they read this. Hugs BonBon  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful!!! *S* They're lucky to have you as dad, dear friend... and I'm betting they know it! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
reading this makes me miss my own daddy that has passed on thanks for the share |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
This means so much more to me now, than if I had read it back years ago when I used to visit this site. My wife and I recently had our own Daughter, and see brings a whole new perspective to my life. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I never had a dad around to love me the way your love your daughters. But I have two daughters (and a husband who has no use for poetry) and this is absolute keepsake treasure! We might fade away and words from paper, but this is forever.  ~ Karen |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno "Psai"....I truly love my son, he's without a doubt my best friend....but there's something special about a daughter isn't there....very nice tribute for all fathers to all daughters.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! IWIHWT ~ I wish I had written that! Like you, I have two daughters and I feel the very same way about them. You expressed what is in my heart for them. Thank you! I shall have them read what you have written for your own. ~ and say that's ditto from me to them!  It appears that they are as fortunate to have you as you are to have them! God bless you all! Loving Light, Linda |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Truly beautiful and heartfelt. Your daughters are obviously as lucky to have you as you are to have them. |
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