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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-05-25 08:22 AM

A Pebble in my Shoe

I lay a pebble in my shoe
To stay the pain of missing you
The weighty loss the change of course
The saddling of waves of dross

To stop illusion of conceive
To will the courage of believe
To fight the battle nights recline
And shift my dreams into divine

It is a dispatch to my goal
That penetrates into my soul
It is an ache of wondrous awe
For I can stand the pain no more

I search the shadows of my lot
To find the arrow cupid shot
But I suspect it melted down
And holds me in a covers gown

To stay a shawl of lace and grace
Into the evermore each place

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2006-05-25 08:51 AM

"It is an ache of wondrous awe
For I can stand the pain no more"

Loved these lines in yet another easy flowing poem from the pen of an expert.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-25 11:03 AM

I search the shadows of my lot
To find the arrow cupid shot
But I suspect it melted down
And holds me in a covers gown

oh that part especially!!

Kalandria
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 44
Yorkshire, England

3 posted 2006-05-25 12:43 PM

"To fight the battle nights recline
And shift my dreams into divine"

Lines that ring true to all those who have hoped for more pleasant dreams. I look forward to reading more of your work.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-05-25 01:13 PM

ah Sir Sy It is most certainly... a stepping stone.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2006-05-25 04:34 PM

Wonderful write Sy. If only pebble in a shoe could divert the pain in a heart.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2006-05-25 06:59 PM

Honeybunch
Thank you so much.

passing,
Thank you dear.

Kalandria
Thank you for the read and reply.

Uriah,
Most certainly.

scorpio
You don't know until you try. LOL

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2006-06-15 03:33 PM

I lay a pebble in my shoe
To stay the pain of missing you

If only that would do the trick... I'd fill my shoes with gravel! *S*

I like this very much, my friend.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2006-06-15 07:56 PM

suthern
Thank you sweety.

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