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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-07-28 08:00 AM



bend mender meandering
got his broke fix fingers
in the mystery bowl sauce

he touches the lady sigh
with his long touch greasy
makes her cotton sticky

and her skin syrup shimmer
she say he is devil boozoo
the pony man with triple row

but she don't mind her ribbons
lost in the nasty man's mud
and her high heal proper

bent down and bare foot easy


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daark

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-07-28 08:10 AM


well, someone has deeply inspired you here this morn...

could it be all that charcoal on your face and body?  



Morning D.




Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-07-28 08:38 AM


ms leej..

was listening to boozoo chavis and beau jocque while sippin some acadian stew..(coffee) musta spilled on the keyboard

thanks lady friend

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-07-28 08:44 AM


you've got to watch out
for those too eager slurps
of that rich brew...




Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-07-28 09:46 AM


ms sun..why?  it only burns for a little bit...wanna sip?  thanks lady friend
seraphin
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5 posted 2006-07-28 10:56 AM


I'll be needing an expansion on my library if you keep this up.

Please do.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-07-28 11:08 AM


Huh?

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
7 posted 2006-07-28 11:18 AM


Sip it hard, it comes up smooth....and, after many beers and few preventive medicine pain pills (in case I get hurt later today), I understood this completely....
Edward Grim
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8 posted 2006-07-28 11:21 AM


Very cool as usual Dark.

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-07-28 01:02 PM


ms sera, I shall hurry over and build you one...humble thanks ms

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interloper, thanks for the innate nature of your commentary

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friend toerag, as usual you grin my thoughts with your reply thank you
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edGrim, humble thanks sir for the review

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2006-07-28 09:28 PM


I think this is almost sultry.  I just want more!

aziza

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-07-29 07:48 AM


ms aziza...thanks for that...we will see what the boozoo conjurs
Ceinwyn
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12 posted 2006-07-30 12:45 PM


am I dork or what? But I'm always in awe when I read your work..I'm such a girl...and such a sucker for words

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-07-30 01:57 AM




if she say
he is devil boozoo
she don't lie

I am a sucker
for words too Ceinwyn

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-07-31 07:26 AM


ms Cein' nothing wrong with being a girl..thank you for the eyes ms


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lady one, thanks for the walk by wiggle, I appreciate your reviews

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