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LeeJ
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0 posted 2006-07-28 07:56 AM


out of the orchestra

chewy air
oozes through
planks in the roof
for long moments
earth waves
instances of life

sweetly,
       my mind listens
to an ever growing voice
thus,
snowing me with social work

interchange
    reaching for knowledge

spending light together
        until yoke of time
serves me mystic oceans
        building rock
swallowing the silence
       my favorite subject

glittering full will
       mighty heart beats
lying next to me
    moving me
like a medical team

love the depth of salt water
     it’s meaning jabbing my ribs
into some
    purgatory of your confidence

every time
       translates the branding
of my flesh
       looking closely  
                into the thyme
of the evaluations

     I  receive each rotation
reminded of the radiation
scattering the far
       reaches of my soul

to be enraptured by
       his waterfall
uninterrupted mercy
       arcing white cloud foam

missing double fudge
        chocolate mousse
    the sharing
         human touch

hard times  
     by which
        our lives  
            are lived
    licking the salt from your face


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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2006-07-28 08:39 AM


chewy air

nuff said

cept' yep!!!

enjoyed it

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-07-28 08:46 AM



Yep...same line grabbed me.
'cept here, it's just huggy muggy.


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-28 09:01 AM


loved the last verses!
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