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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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a slivered moon sits 'neath hot pink clouds in a deepening blue sky aiming for cobalt, and night is nigh the day's heat dissipates, even as the heart anticipates heat from passionate night moves, the body grooves, tuning itself up for a symphony of sighs but then I slip through the back door of reality, alone as the slivered moon suddenly slides itself past cobalt into ebony |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
very very pretty |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh. Captivating night moves, Kacy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a course this runs! Well done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I saw just that last night... so nice to see it again this morning...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
those fingernail moons like a razor slit in velvet an eye of god perhaps behind watching or perhaps looking the other way enjoyed your art |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a slivered moon sits 'neath hot pink clouds in a deepening blue sky aiming for cobalt, and night is nigh this was beautiful and the entire poem, amazingly touches the reader deeply |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful read as is the images it gives me. Hope you don't mind if I print this one. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
it smiles me, froggy  |
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