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Two Suns
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Two Suns |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Two Suns Two suns awake me every dawn My love and sun that lights the morn We watch the sky fill palette clouds And wet our brush in dew drop shrouds Then look upon the buds that yawn Stretching petals at the dawn Glistening in their dawning’s twist Making diamond in the mist And then those fields, those fields of green Beckoning us with bright new clean Stretching to horizons cast Our ship awaits I see the mast We hug and kiss upon the breeze The billowing sail in bounding tease And watch the waters of the sea Just you and me, just you and me And when the night falls into dark We seek our star and disembark And enter into fantasy Two souls in one eternity We never left our Eden’s grace It’s been here all along this place |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sure you don't have three?   |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Exatly the kind of poem I needed today. Beautiful! Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ It has been said that love is immeasurable ... yet, you measure it in treasurable poetic thoughts~  'And when the night falls into dark We seek our star and disembark And enter into fantasy Two souls in one eternity We never left our Eden’s grace It’s been here all along this place' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Two souls in one eternity We never left our Eden’s grace It’s been here all along this place' love it, Sy M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us Sy! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A wonder of a poem and so brilliantly rymed too,thank you for these words Sy... Goldenrose. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Lovely. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Simply beautiful Seymour and very much enjoyed my friend, nice to hear you happy, I hope it stays with your tomorrows. Sincerely Rick |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
I'm disembarking onto planet Poetic Paradise as we speak. Loved this write. cheye x |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
wonderful, Sy, as always you have such a way of weaving words into beauty *smiles* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
"We watch the sky fill palette clouds And wet our brush in dew drop shrouds" LOVE THIS. I enjoyed reading this. Your words dance around & put a smile on my face. This is one to save & come back to. |
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