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aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-27 01:04 AM

Dried Words

if i write i don't hurt
the feelings magically
become words.
a poem, a story
who knows, who cares.
it is all just my way
of dealing, of stealing
emotions i don't want
and putting them here
where i can deal with them
and i can turn my back
knowing that now ... now
they are owned by another
if i write i don't hurt
the feelings magically
become words
and dry up to blow away.

aziza

Wilga
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since 2006-07-25

Posts 22

1 posted 2006-07-27 01:14 AM

This is really good, sums up perfectly for my why I write, badly as I do.
Thanks for this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-07-27 02:15 AM

I am simply amazed at the way you see things...it's awesome!

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

3 posted 2006-07-27 12:18 PM

*smiles*
this is why I write too darlin'
wonderful therapy, it is

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-07-28 01:22 AM

Sometimes I can write just the right words that make me feel better...other times...James

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2006-07-28 06:30 AM

How wonderful was this dear friend, as wonderful as the truth of which so many poets as myself would love to express, you said it just exactly as it is and somehow that gave me a freedom, even if just for a moment, but it felt great. Thank you so much for these words that I will hold and nourish, protect and never let blow away.

Thank you for sharing Aziza, much enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

6 posted 2006-07-28 07:04 AM

I wonder how many other poets on here would say its the same for them too.
heaps, I imagine.
You wrote it beautifully.
love Cheye

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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7 posted 2006-07-28 09:58 AM

Been there....done that....bought the T-shirt but it dried up and blew away before I could put it on....

Isn't it amazing, how much you can heal by writing of the feelings? Something about the defining, the putting-into-pictures....just helps.

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-07-28 11:55 PM

well put!
Writing can be extremely cathartic.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2006-07-29 12:14 PM

Ah, poet....

parts of this
are true;

parts...
of the other
have to be lived.

Venus1974
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since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

10 posted 2006-07-29 12:50 PM

I also write poetry to express myself...nore often than not it is about my own personal emotions...and more often than not filled with pain...very well put!

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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