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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-07-25 03:09 PM

Happenstance immediately brought to my attention
all those little things that you forgot to mention
with no remorse, I could bid you adieu
I'll never have to cry again, over you.

Now I know that I'm on a mission
to make these dreams come to fruition...
and it may take me a little while
but in the end, I'll be the one smiling…

You really believed that I wouldn't see
all these things that you've presented to be
as truth

are only falsities

I believed, Oh I believed you shined like a star
and now I don't even know who you are
lacking courage, hide you can
it's so much easier to be a boy, than a man.

Your face no longer do I recognize
the person within, you try to disguise.
Once again fate has knocked on your door
you spoke in tongue, now reap the reward

You've no one to blame but yourself, this is true
the one your facade has hurt the most, is you...

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-07-25 03:28 PM

This is a fine letting go poem here Donna, thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-07-25 03:43 PM

Agreeing with Phil's comments.
You are such a strong yet gentle lady!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-07-25 06:31 PM

Phil, thank you

Kacy, oh if only I were sweetie..thank you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-07-25 07:41 PM

You are stronger than you realize Donna.
A most excellent write.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-07-25 07:57 PM

Choose truth...James

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2006-07-25 08:06 PM

There is nothing more sad than a person who is afraid to be authentic. It spreads a lot of confusion...
Great write written from your gentle spirit in stating that the false self must be in a lot of pain.

Shenachie

deasomnians
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 87
California

7 posted 2006-07-25 08:34 PM

An excellent account of strength. The first and last stanzas are outstanding.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2006-07-26 08:55 AM

Thanks, to each of you. I appreciate your replies.

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