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Open Poetry #38

Most of The Joy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-05-25 12:29 PM

Most of The Joy

I loved the way she'd shake the
rugs and vacuum in the morning.
About half the time she'd give
the task to me, and then she'd
say, "There James, doesn't that
make you feel better." And I
would say, "Yes it does."
In retrospect, most of the joy
came from her being with me.

JamesLee
May12
2006
I release
this angel.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (05-26-2006 05:12 PM).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2006-05-25 12:32 PM

sometimes it's those moments, that we hold on to the most.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-05-25 04:03 AM

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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3 posted 2006-05-25 11:38 AM

Great write James.

Eric

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2006-05-25 03:49 PM

And it comes back afterwards

Maybe she will

Thoughts are never one sided

Control is

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

5 posted 2006-05-26 06:52 AM

Loved this JamesM

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2006-05-26 09:10 AM

JamesMichael~
Such tender memories you share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Debo
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since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-06-01 07:04 AM

What a lovely memory you have of her.
No one can take your memories

Debo

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2006-06-01 07:46 AM

I used to date a man, who always used to ask me what the best part of our date was, each and everytime, I'd tell him...sharing it or being there with you...I don't think he believed or understood that???

Good thoughts to ponder, not to mention, sharing the chores, is part of love as much as helping one another.

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