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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Monday blue was the color of another day and I found myself not understanding October I ran without reservation to sovember driven to a place beyond the edge lucid pine upon air it didn’t know in a moon that shot a thousand nights electric fireflies wailed across the sky in a night that fled unforgiving green is your color as you slowly plant Monday just some words cut from |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear 1slick_lady, I have read and read, it is magical when you can make the reader do this, you sound in a daze and unknowing your wants and needs, green may be the where the grass is greener and where Monday is planted a new ( to start a new) October and November, confusing times and maybe where everything went wrong. I hope all goes right for you my friend, that you find your way through the maze of life and find that each new week brings joy. Be well and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent!  |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Incredible!!! I truly envy your ability to paint such startling, solid images with just a few simple words. The mark of a true artist. Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen, |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
To echo anothers words, worthy of being read again, and again... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautiful, Helen. I really love "sovember." |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
this reads like a dream you wake up from, smiling...beautiful |
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