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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Content he loves me for who I am not in who I should be and in him I have found a safe place just some words cut from |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
* note to editor ed…yes yes yes I KNOW it should be whom and not who but that is why…you love me ...giggle |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Here I thought the use of 'who' was artistic license. (grins) I think it sounds better and I really like this poem. It's beautiful. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice place to be for sure |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Who" flows, Helen. "Whom" just sits. I like your choice. I love your poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
yes..a safe place to be. *smiling at the comfort found here* |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Very nice. I wish I could say the same. |
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