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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2006-07-23 12:58 PM


The summer breeze of my life
whistling, carefree
has flutterd for a fleeting finale
carrying along on it's silken silver curls
my past love.
who were you, my love?
distant as a time stream
i know you no longer
Amber,
your energy consumes me
It is all I remember, aside from your name
that face is one with the shadows
and your hair is blind
how i wish to know it's color
your head on my shoulder
innocent and lovely
our pre-life love strong
if only i knew love, so long ago

nice use of muffin



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deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2006-07-23 07:13 AM


It seems we both are preoccupied with the subjects of love and memories as witnessed also by my recent posts here.  Only I am presently on the up side and you, unfortunately on the down side.  But believe me- I've been there too. And whether with Amber or some other Love object, You too shall also know the bright side of Memory and Love as time goes by.

Blessings to you, Enjoyed the read,
  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-07-24 12:24 PM



Oh! Beautiful work!

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