Open Poetry #38 |
Lebanon |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Lebanon Between two lines of crimson red A cedar stands most strong On flag flown for the bombed and dead Where war’s gone on too long And white the peaks and white the sand Above the line of blue Befallen by united lands Who’ve kept Israelis true Till ‘truthful promise’ sworn to man To swap for captured three Led to a ‘just reward’ so planned That nations could agree That while Iran instilled their plan That strong and battered tree ‘Tween Hezb'Allah and IDF Should burn incessantly They’d build “A” bombs while Lebanon’s Abhorred by you and me. My opinion, Lighthouse Bob |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
BRAVO!!! Lighthousebob-that really needs to be said. A graceful, subtle, yet clear reminder of the families caught in REAL terror, every living moment. I won't get into my political opinions, as it's perhaps not appropriate in this forum, but I have to say; I'm shocked and abhorred about Israel's complete lack of diplomacy. (An eye for an eye stains beyond the borders, and pre-emptive air strikes on civilians is just wrong/bad... perhaps even evil.) I feel ashamed to sit here in comfort while my equals suffer so much, yet feel torn through my ignorance of the whole history. Your poem swipes away the clutter of spin, and gently sings the truth. Thank you! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i cant think of anything other than righteous Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
My Dear Friend BOB, How current and intriguing your take and poetic commentary on Lebanon, and the perpetual heartbreak of hatred which so mars the place of the Cedars. Very insightful-about the very sad, David Every Day's a Blessing And Gift-Wrapped from Above, Share it with another And Spread the Father's Love!!! May You come to Know His Best Blessing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Hoping, dear Bob, that the International Conference on Lebanon which will be held in Rome on Wednesday, will unite leaders who really WANT peace. Thank you for your insightful poem. May no men ever hate to the point of being insensitive to innocence. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...In Lebanon, there is a teenage boy offering solace of shelter and nourishment of several kinds, to both sides. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Current and heart-touching. Thank you. aziza |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thank you so very very much for all of your most kind replies and I want you to know that you have all touched my heart deeply with your concern for Lebanon and her citizens who are once again suffering so extremely much loss and pain at the hands of war. God bless. -Bob |
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