Open Poetry #38 |
Suds |
Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
When only midnight cries a star a - dripping , white light blood on autumn trees... on olden knees and summer graves so near. When only wishes, grin with skin and... wrinkles count again when... tears that pillow, suds of self, come falling, I'll be here. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I do love your style! |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Thank You so very much , Passing Shadows. I've just found this site. so far, I like what I see here. I return your compliment, your poetry, very wonderful! Will |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful write. TD |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes...enjoying reading you, glad you found Pip! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful piece of work!!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very nice...glad to bump this back to the top |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. aziza |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Will, very much enjoyed this, thank you for sharing here. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just came back to read again |
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