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Will Rhyme
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0 posted 2006-05-23 12:40 PM



When only midnight cries a star
a - dripping , white light blood

on autumn trees... on olden knees

and

summer graves
so near.


When only wishes, grin with skin
and... wrinkles  count again

when...

tears that pillow, suds of self,

come falling,


I'll be here.

© Copyright 2006 Will Rhyme - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-23 12:46 PM


wow! I do love your style!
Will Rhyme
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2 posted 2006-05-23 12:49 PM


Thank You so very much , Passing Shadows.

I've just found this site.  so far, I like what I see here.

I return your compliment, your poetry, very wonderful!

Will

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-05-23 09:40 AM


Beautiful write.
TD

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with you
4 posted 2006-05-23 10:04 AM


yes...enjoying reading you, glad you found Pip!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-05-23 10:48 AM


Beautiful piece of work!!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2006-07-23 02:54 AM


Very nice...glad to bump this back to the top
aziza
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7 posted 2006-07-23 03:02 AM


This is a beautiful poem.  Thank you for sharing it.

aziza

Rick
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8 posted 2006-07-23 08:11 AM


Will, very much enjoyed this, thank you for sharing here.

Sincerely
Rick

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9 posted 2006-07-23 06:01 PM


just came back to read again

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