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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-07-19 02:48 PM


serindipity

A crowning achievement in summer’s years
marriage of motherly acumen came home

turning toward the lecture
drawing what nobody seemed to have noticed
becoming a beggar of my own demise

taking an intimate journey back to nature
time testing cognitive significance

perspectives were ice cold, clear and optimistic
affirming levels of drama and joy of mainstream humor

refreshing may pole with ghost of vision
building parcel of the fittest
trust fund of nightly profits that go bump
in the dark

finding pulse through blood siphoning pull
mentally flossing the mind of this moron…
lighting up with spring drum rolls
taking children’s books to good will

becoming the hump on whales
in wet grey deep of cryptic seas
turning dogma witty
in philosophical thought-provoking pools

haunting lucidity roars my last supper
in days of false kings
Monday mourning now a hit parade
Of health and fitness routine

I am the terminator of the hula hoop
Droning out substantial legacies
of hallmark problems

darkness and emotional complexities
are above all else, a Christmas of humanity
with their wise cracking contacts…
and a hit parade of musical sound


[This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-20-2006 07:54 AM).]

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-07-19 09:48 PM



I'm trying to think of the substance
that would best depict layering...
first I think you're going this way...
and then you go there...
and then boomerang...back.

Amazing...

talented woman, you!


JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-07-21 10:22 AM


I agree with Sunshine!!
Yes you are.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2006-07-21 10:37 AM


ms leej, it is a pleasure to watch
all of your videos at once
enjoyed this slice of your pie mind
muchly

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2006-07-21 02:33 PM


affirming levels of drama and joy of mainstream humor   .....

Lee I love the mixture of you and yes always keep the sense og humour no matter what

Hope

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