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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-18 07:31 AM


the old roads are tattoos
on my back skin
can feel the sun witchery
fingering the lines
playing with the curves

whispering do you remember
how the highways moans
when your rub her legs
with the chrome smoke
when you feed her mornings

and give her the time
to blend heavenly and hellyeah
into the undulations
of man and metal bending bones
into poems without souls

and the new roads are her children


_____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-18-2006 08:46 AM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-07-18 10:01 AM


a very sultry way of describing our choices and how they come back to haunt us...or bless us
but in all ends, comes beginnings, and inbetween times are memorable, rewarding and enriching...

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-18-2006 10:48 AM).]

Martie
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2 posted 2006-07-18 10:07 AM


DS   "when you feed her morning"....Gads, I love the way you write her!!  
Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-07-18 10:13 AM


...and give her the time
to blend heavenly and hellyeah...

...into poems without souls

~*~

Yes.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-07-18 10:13 AM


makes me want to hit the road today
feel the sun witchery
trace my furrows

undulating thoughts here...
~sigh~
you always gift a deep sigh

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-07-18 04:14 PM




You write your love for the road so sweetly sinful.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-07-18 04:21 PM


ms leej, most humble thanks lady friend

___________


ms martie, thank you lil neighbor, slow hugs


______________


ms sun, always something there for your eyes, thanks to you

__________

ms midnite, thank you for tiptoeing by
and dropping your keys on the hardwood floor


_____________

lady one, darn that highway she just sucks my words out..so effortlessly, thanks for the whisper

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