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my best friend
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my best friend |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104
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i dont think this is one of my best poems... but i hope you like it! I never excepted to feel this way suddenly I don’t feel so afraid all I want is you to be here to take away my sorrow, drown out my tears you were always my best friend and now I think my broken heart will mend once you come back into my life I feel like everything will be alright I miss good the times we had laughing joking, never sad when I’m with you I cant help but smile your the guy who makes my life worth while I know you hurt me bad and sometimes make me sad but that doesn’t matter anymore I love you now more then ever before I try not to think of you with all my might but I think of when we used to talk all night the good times we had, the memories we made will be burned in my mind, they will never go away. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Wow, Very sensitive read. Thank you for sharing with us. Hugs Kimberly |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is actually a pretty good poem. You express yourself well in this. Nice write! Keep it up. Kristabell "If I have learnt anything, it is that life forms no logical patterns. It is haphazard and full of beauties which I try to catch as they fly by, for w |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
thank's so much! |
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silentmage13 Junior Member
since 2005-11-20
Posts 14Florida |
Definitely something I can relate to!!! You are an awesome poet! Hope can only be found inside yourself, never in a person or thing. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely write...could definately feel the longing...enjoyed |
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