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What Do You See? |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon 
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Tell me now, what do you see When you take a look at me? Chestnut curls, mussed by the wind, Eyes of smokey misted blue, Sweetberry lips in a seductive grin, Loving arms that reach for you? Perhaps you still see long lean legs the pleasing curve from hip to waist The gentle swell of rising breasts Belonging to the girl from eons past. Please look a little closer, dear, There's much more to this work of art My soul soars bravely, without fear I'm more than the sum of all of my parts These eyes could tell of galaxies my dreamer's heart created Of damson moons and cherry stars In vanilla skies suspended From these nectareous, berried lips, I entreat you to drink freely Of the passion of a thousand years, Rivaled only by goddess, Kundalini My womb has birthed a universe, Held dear in my arms' span, Nurturing breasts feed distant worlds That I alone command Brilliant stars, by my hand led, Born of my tears so precious, Form the circlet that adorns Cascading mahogany tresses My blazing moon, in purple hues, From amethyst to lavendar Is the splendid crowning glory of my violaceous scepter I challenge you, my champion, Captive of the land and sky, Cast away your earthly chains Let your spirit with mine fly There's more than just this body this sleeping shell of flesh and bone look now, beyond this mortal veil to where my essence finds its home Please take my hand, I'll guide you Where our hearts can soar so free And we'll trip the light fantastic To imagination's symphony Tell me, now what do you see When, with closed eyes, You look at me? [This message has been edited by divine chaos (07-12-2006 11:48 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, mother to the universe...  You are soaring now! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
*grins* In our own little worlds, we are all royalty  ~Sheli~ By words the mind is winged |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aw, this is sweet. You put out a good message. Awesome write! Kristabell |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
B E A U T I F U L ! ! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Okay, I wasn't go to bring this to the pages here But who you are is all I hold dear. You are a woman of a complex nature You have a soul that is beautiful and pure. You are a goddess with a radiant sheen What you are no(NOT) is a regal Queen! That is me and you need to back away Or "OFF WITH YOUR HEAD!" I'll have to say I am Queen of the Rockettes and more There is nothing in life that I am more sure. You are talented, beautiful and a darlin' friend But on the Queen issue -- your delusions have to come to an end! QoR Love you and this was for your own good (wanders out and grins) |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
thank you all for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed the read now for aziza -- *rolls, giggling* aziza, sweet, my friend so dear whatever are you smoking? to say that I am not the Queen.. well, surely you are joking. Look at me, I have the crown, the scepter and the dress! but, for you, I shall concede You can be Queen, and I shall be THE Goddess. *smirks* love you too! ~Sheli~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Darlin', that's a carrot you hold in your hand It's true I am Queen I rule all over Divine Chaos land You can be a goddess With a jeweled crown and a lovely dress While I have power and instill dread every time I yell, "OFF WITH HER HEAD!" QoR Now stop or they will kick us out! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
i believe that what you suffer from they call delusions of grandeur how can you think the power of Queen trumps that of Goddess pure? As for your crazed hallucinations that you instill feelings of dread To you, I'll say this only once THPPPPPPPTTTT!!! I'm off to bed *grins and dances off* see you in the morning, lovely (but less powerful than the goddess) one ~*Sheli*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Whispers :: You really don't see You are ONLY goddess Because of my decree! Sleep tight and I love you, oh delusional one. My apologies to all others in this site -- we really are certifiable! Or, at least, she is! |
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^justred^ New Member
since 2006-07-13
Posts 1Illinois |
i laugh while you two poke your fun... you're distracted, so i'm almost done. The fact is neither here nor there... which is Queen its hardly fair. To banter as you've done you see... you've passed down the Queenly goods to me. The ceptor and the crown fit fine within my hand & on regal head of mine. For a Queen would hardly argue power... So now dear two, tis time to cower. The reign was simply within my grasp... so bow down, pucker and kiss my @$$.... love you both! *giggles* ^justred^/miri/zora/whoevertheheckiam |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another outstanding piece! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: aziza stares in horror, then pokes Sheli, whispering, "See what you've done now! :: Thank you for joining in our fun. aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I din't do nuffin! I'll deal with you two in IM before we all get booted off the boards for being certifiable. *laughs* By words the mind is winged ~Aristophanes~ |
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