you make me feel like Mary Magdalene

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Open Poetry #38

you make me feel like Mary Magdalene

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

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0 posted 2006-05-20 06:10 PM

you make me feel
like Mary Magdalene
for there must have been a day
that she came to him with water
when he only wanted shade

and I am sure
he had a parable
that convinced her to remain
but you
gave to me a blueprint
and the memory of rain

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[This message has been edited by shirtless (05-21-2006 10:35 PM).]

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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1 posted 2006-05-20 06:21 PM

I'm running out of words to express how much I admire your talent and how powerful your poetry is! Needless to say - excellent poem, perfect use of images

Melissa~

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SEA

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2 posted 2006-05-20 06:23 PM

"and the memory of rain"

I like that very much....for me it's got such an impact!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-05-20 06:25 PM

Wow! This is going straight into my library of favorites. It's outstanding.
You capture so much in your word portraits.
These are fine works of poetic art.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2006-05-20 08:27 PM

Leaves a powerful impression, indeed!

Captivating.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

5 posted 2006-05-21 12:50 PM

"but you
gave to me a blueprint
and the memory of rain"

Wow shirtless!

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2006-05-21 01:50 AM

And what a memory you have given us!

- Owl

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
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7 posted 2006-07-09 04:17 PM

This is simply beautiful. I am so glad that I have had the opportunity to read it.

Thank you for sharing.

aziza

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