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I Haven't Gone
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I Haven't Gone |
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Adonis Cross Junior Member
since 2003-04-07
Posts 46Miami, FL, USA |
I haven't gone to see your stone, and kneel Beside the mound that interrupts the lawn; My worried friends have told me why they feel I haven't gone. They bring me flowers I can lay upon Your grave, and offer words to help me heal, To make me unafraid of moving on. I never try to tell them of our deal, Of how you said, "I'll greet you every dawn, In spirit, with a whisper to reveal I haven't gone." |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
how very touching, incredibly so thank you for sharing ~*Sheli*~ |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
A beautiful and haunting description of outside misunderstanding and inner trust. -Katie |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, this aches with love's memory a high note, off the scale who could NOT be moved by this... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A very moving piece of work. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are freedoms plenty within this poem... because of the loss, you will find new strength every day. Excellent... and thank you. |
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