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Dancer's Seduction
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Dancer's Seduction |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
Prickling pine along my neck Tingling spine at his call and beck Ruby red gushing through weakening veins The fading pink blush only sign that remains Dancing the same dance to a new song As though I should have been en pointe all along Body frame twirls and thoughts don’t exist Spinning and spinning, persuasion persists Moving to rhythms as tense as you please Fawning and falling on worn hands and knees Words I can’t speak searing my flesh Your name fills my lungs as often as breath Cerulean eyes carve my vague silhouette Implanting those notions I cannot forget The footwork you want I will never know One last pirouette and then I must go |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
i love this, read aloud it just rolls off the tongue, and the images it elicits bring a sigh thank you for sharing .. and welcome to PiP! ~*Sheli*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes inddeedy marvelous read...you remind me of a poet who had the same gift at rhyme...well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful...much enjoyed the read. Welcome to Passions. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wonderful read, I enjoyed it greatly. Welcome. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a lovely pirouette of words and images dancing across the blue screen welcome |
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