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Shattered Dreams (repost from Open Poetry #37)
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Shattered Dreams (repost from Open Poetry #37) |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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5309 Shattered Dreams 17 April 2006 That night of her shattered dreams that love lost, the world emptied but why was this so Sadness to her heart words to think What could it be Had she done wrong this love, her desire that nectar of happiness to drink Her beauty, of her soul her heart, her warmth She was love but someone had taken her shattered dreams Stolen, wasn’t love meant to last forever Maybe that was what she wanted to know Sleep, sweet princess sleep within your heart rest your soul and know each day each morning was but another start “How precious also are thy thoughts unto me, O God! how great is the sum of them!” Psalms 139: 17 KJV a poet who cares This poem was created as a recording first, and the text written down from the recording. It took around 2 minutes to compose the recorded works |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
beautiful piece, this thank you for sharing  ~*Sheli*~ |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
This poem was composed in voice first, and put on the page, from the transcript of that recording. And you are more that welcome to download and listen to this recording of my voice in its raw state, composing the above poem shattered dreams mp3 In other words, until I opened my mouth to speak, in making this recording, the poem never did exist. a poet who cares |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for posting your "Shattered Dreams" -- it is beautiful. aziza |
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