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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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0 posted 2006-07-09 07:52 PM


It’s a cruel thing
That never goes away
It lingers there
Through time
Reminding you
To never forget
Every tear you’ve shed
The lessons
The pain
It’s a cruel thing
That never goes away
It lasts forever
Damned is the power of a…
Simple memory.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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1 posted 2006-07-09 08:18 PM



M'dear, you are most
innocent...

for all that has surrounded you
and your past...

you are a history maker.

Write on.



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
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2 posted 2006-07-09 09:35 PM


GREAT JOB! I really enjoyed this.. can't wait to read more..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-07-10 12:16 PM




"Damned is the power of a…
Simple memory."

Oh how painfully true. Good work!


passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-07-10 07:00 AM


so true indeed!
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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5 posted 2006-07-12 12:35 PM


You just said it like it is -- even when we move on, I don't think we ever forget.  I really like your style.

aziza

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