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Sunset Infusion
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Sunset Infusion |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Softly swayed are these thoughts by the breezes which play as the evening embraces the end of the day. Clouds tinged gold dot the sky as the Earth breathes a sigh for the troubles of just one more day passing by. Subtle hues to unfold overshadowing blues sending remnants of scattering cares to the wind. It's an island of calm in an ocean of " do's" to imagine you've left all the noise and the din. Scarlet sun on the fade making welcome the dusk I implore, linger on, your depature from sight means too soon comes the dawn to be faced by this husk. I lament just how swift is the passing of night. But for now, we have this, your transcendent display to replenish, perhaps, some of what's bled away. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
absolutely beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I could read you all day...this is an excellent write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have missed you, Doc. And here you are in impressive form, and oh my sighing, you tempt me try to the sonnet yet again, but my meter is never quite up to snuff. Yours, tho, is lovely.  It's so sweet to read you again. I love your stuff yanno.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my, what a lovely sky sigh you've penned a touch of mellow melencholy |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
divine chaos, Thanks so much, while I havent read any of your posts yet, I'll be sure to check some out. Doc LeeJ, Thanks again, what a sweet compliment from one who writes as well as you. Doc Serenity, And I have missed you. I pop in briefly and read a little, time being what it is. You are definately a source that inspires. Doc Midnitesun, Yes, it is all about loss, and renewal. What the days take away from us in these cluttered times. A brief moment of solace from any source is a balm to the soul. Doc |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like this a lot. It reminds me of a late fall evening on the beach -- having a beer, after a day of clam digging. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous picture you've described here! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Indeed a wonderful sonnet! You have been truly missed. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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ambivalence Junior Member
since 2006-07-13
Posts 15Canada |
So light and organic. Very nice. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
When my day seems to be filled with alot of trouble, I am so glad when that day does end. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Brilliant. Love the rhythm. Excelent write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote: This was just beautiful! You know, I sometime wonder if after reading the news, if somewhere in this universe Mother Earth does indeed just breathe a sigh as I. Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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